05 July 2004

Sentence Fragment

      Okay, boys and girls, let's see if we can re-order two paragraphs from this article to point out the obvious. Here is the first paragraph to consider:

The boys, who were one and two years old when adopted, told a horrific story of being beaten, forced to sleep in the cages, often given only buttered bread for dinner, of eating their feces to avoid being punished for having an accident and of drinking their urine when deprived of water.
And here is the second:

Ontario Court Judge Donald Halikowski condemned the couples' behaviour Monday, but said there was no evidence that the couple were sadists.
Now, all together: ~~One of these things doesn't belong here....~~

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